GTEE1104 FBA K8 Practice 6 19/2/2009
Posted by KaMaRaZaMaN on February 20, 2009
FBA K8 Practice 6 19/2/2009
using visual aids
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Dear students:
Please give your comments for your own presentation in the comment box below. Please use your real name in writing your comments. Other students may also give comments. These are some of the criteria that you can you use:
Contents (all elements of the introduction; main ideas & supporting details; linkers for ideas in the body of the presentation);
Delivery (posture & gesture, eye contact, voice (volume, tempo, clarity), time limit);
Internal traits (confidence, attentive towards the audience, show interest in the topic )
Language (Vocabulary, grammatical structures, fluency, pronunciation),
Visual Aids (appropriate, make use of them)
Others (not reading but refer to note-cards; mix with other languages or Malaysian English; involve the audience; friendly towards the audience)
If you were given a chance to redo your presentation, what are the aspects that you think need to be improved further? These aspects may include your strengths, weaknesses, opportunities and threats (challenges) in addition to the criteria listed above.
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Aina
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Aisyah
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Amira
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Dahlia
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Hafizah
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Choon Wei
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Dinie
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Nurul Ain
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Ay Sy
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Sok Sim
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Wan Jun
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Refer to the presentation guide on visual aids.
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aishah~ said
have to improve…
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dahlia said
need to change many things to look better.
KaMaRaZaMaN said
COMMENTS ON VISUAL AIDS
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Aina
Negative
- use fancy fonts, very difficult to read
Positive
- points are well organized and shown one a time
- images are visible except for the products sold,you should display one or two products at a time with the images.
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Aisyah
Negative
- use fancy fonts for contents
- don’t show key words one at a time
- headings for facilities and packages are smaller than the contents
- too crowded for packages, show one at a time and use a box for the time and price.
- grammatical errors: types of massage, types of facial treatment, 1 hour,
Positive
- use relevant pictures but should increase the size a little bit to one-third or half of the page
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Amira
Negative
- use gradient colours for background
- investment diagram – not clear, wrong choice of colors for wordings and background, supporting images are small,
- should increase the size for contents after the outline; the wordings are not clear
- don’t show key words one at a time
Positive
- huge title, should use a box
- nice pictures for Acheh before tsunami but not that visible, you should show the images one at a time and name of the place,
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Dahlia
Negative
-use a irrelevant animated image
- outline not clear, just increase the size and use key words.
-use colourful background and images with different levels of brightness( the history). Wordings are not visible.
- use sentences / paragraphs after the history
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I guess comments for others are almost similar.
Excellence for your diligent efforts.
ummul said
i like aina’s presentation
others are good too
but need to change something like what sir said